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Liar
Contributed by
skyblumoon
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Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 09:44:15 AM in AEST
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"LIAR "
You say you want to be with me
You say you truly care
But when I'm face to face with you
Its like I'm not even there
I've tried my best to make you happy
And please you in every way
But if you don't want to be with me
There is nothing more I can do or say
I waste tears on you every night
And hope that tomorrow it will be all right
Things don't get better
They only stay the same
I NEED TO REALIZE YOU WILL NEVER CHANGE!
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skyblumoon
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2004-11-04 09:44:15]
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Re: Liar
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by pixie on
Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 09:47:16 AM AEST
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i think you summed it up well at the end, but walking away from someone can be very hard, you deserve someone better, who wants to be with you and who will show you love, a very touching write, difficult decision you have to make hun
takecare,
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Re: Liar
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by mysticpoet on
Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 09:47:52 AM AEST
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| Poems are a good way to get your feelings out--there are good, honest guys out there, look at some of the poems written about boyfriends and husbands. There are some good ones out there worth your time. |
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Re: Liar
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 09:54:47 AM AEST
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| I can relate to this poem in so many ways and i'm gald you wrote this and shared it. |
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Re: Liar
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by Stitch on
Friday, 5th November 2004 @ 09:40:09 AM AEST
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Amen.
Stitch |
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Re: Liar
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 4th December 2004 @ 10:04:48 PM AEST
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| amazing write. powerful and emotional. well written. my beliefs are that everyone lies, it just matters what they lie about and to what extent. but sometimes our mind tries to cope in ways such as this and it makes things worse in the end. |
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