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Addict
Contributed by
skyblumoon
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Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 09:36:38 AM in AEST
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"ADDICT"
We live to die
We smoke to get high
We run to drugs
Sweep our problems under the rug
You think it'll go away
Reality is here to stay
Drugs make you happy
I make you blue
You said you'd quit
I BELIEVED IN YOU
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2004-11-04 09:36:38]
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Re: Addict
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by pixie on
Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 09:39:22 AM AEST
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drugs are never the answer to solving problems, you're just covering up one problem with anothet, I hope that you can help this person to get off drugs,
takecare,
pixie xx |
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Re: Addict
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by screwup on
Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 10:04:22 AM AEST
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this is a strong emotional write... although short, I thought it was very good.
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Re: Addict
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by Catalina on
Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 11:02:00 AM AEST
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| I enjoyed reading this. I relate to it alot. Thanks for sharing |
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Re: Addict
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by kidpoet_213 on
Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 01:42:38 PM AEST
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Blu...
Pixie's right... drugs never solve anything... they just magnify the probs more... and screwup's right also... this is a very emotional write... and very good!
~Donna~ |
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Re: Addict
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by Deathly_Rose on
Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 12:22:03 PM AEST
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Drugs ARE never the answer everybody knows it, but that will not make people quit. Nothing an addicts friend/family says, will make them stop, the only thing that can stop them, is themself. I understand the point you are trying to get across, and I really do like this poem, it shows why people use drugs, and things like that, so once again, this was a good poem. keep writing
-Alicia |
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Re: Addict
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 4th December 2004 @ 10:09:05 PM AEST
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| another amazing write. written to perfection. drugs are used to escape problems, all they do is shut you in that trap door that they used. and they cant get out of it again. they are trapped in their own problems and eventually drown in them. like i said amazing write. great rhythym and very powerful. |
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Re: Addict
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 09:46:12 AM AEST
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If only people knew how much drugs hurt some one. the pain the put upon you and by telling you they will stop it to much to top.
great write
~ :: christina :: ~ |
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