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Swan Made Of Icing

Contributed by pixie on Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 08:27:56 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



You made me a lovely white icing swan,
After we die your token of love will live on,
I didn’t do anything to deserve your gift,
But it gave me more than just a little lift.

No-one has ever done the sweet things you do,
Never shown their love to me so true,
My swan is so beautiful as is our love,
I know you were sent to me as an angel from above.

The swan so delicately crafted holds so much beauty,
You made it out of the blue, not out of duty,
These little loving things come as a surprise,
They elevate my heart right up into the skies.

I look over at my icing swan that you made,
A wonderful show of your love you displayed,
I never thought I could find a love like yours,
But I have & it’s bursting through my door.

I will treasure my swan forever & a day,
Always in my heart is where the swan will stay,
Love to me is about all the little, precious things,
As they are the ones that make my soul truly sing.






Copyright © pixie ... [ 2004-11-04 08:27:56]
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Re: Swan Made Of Icing (User Rating: 1 )
by Kindredblood_dragon on Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 08:33:16 AM AEST
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Aw this is so sweet and beautiful, loved it from beginning to end, so tender and passionate, all and more you have combined with words of honey, awesome write pixie.


Re: Swan Made Of Icing (User Rating: 1 )
by mysticpoet on Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 08:38:11 AM AEST
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Good-Morning Pixie
Beautiful Poem-That was a very touching thing Mark did, making you the swan. Nice guys like that are hard to find.


Re: Swan Made Of Icing (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 08:47:32 AM AEST
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It truly is the little, unexpected things , that mean the most isnt it?
This is just beautiful, honest and refreshing.
Very well done
Roses
Larry


Re: Swan Made Of Icing (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 09:35:17 AM AEST
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i like the whole cocept of this pixie a swan made from icing, beautiful work.

johnny.


Re: Swan Made Of Icing (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 09:57:47 AM AEST
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I can't ever recall seeing a white icing swan but it sounds elegant, delicate and gorgeous.

How lucky you are.

Wonderful poem of expression.

Kie


Re: Swan Made Of Icing (User Rating: 1 )
by skyblumoon on Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 10:02:51 AM AEST
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Very touching and beautiful write.
Blu


Re: Swan Made Of Icing (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 10:09:48 AM AEST
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Awww, that's so sweet. :)
I love this Pixie, it's cute.
I am glad you're happy.
*huggies*
Phil xxx


Re: Swan Made Of Icing (User Rating: 1 )
by a_bear on Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 10:23:36 AM AEST
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I remember when my Mark sent me his home made cookies..yummy. I still have one in the freezer..not as romantic as a beautiful swan..and I did have to eat them. but no one had ever made me cookies before; no man I mean..it made my heart soar..that's a wonderful feeling. Your poetry captures it well..great job.


Re: Swan Made Of Icing (User Rating: 1 )
by pander on Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 10:42:09 AM AEST
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Another beautiful write from the Queen of beautiful writes!


Re: Swan Made Of Icing (User Rating: 1 )
by Catalina on Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 11:10:28 AM AEST
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This was so well written. A beautiful write. I really enjoyed reading this.


Re: Swan Made Of Icing (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 03:15:26 PM AEST
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Oh what a beautiful gesture..and even more beautiful poem.... I loved this so much....
Thank you for sharing it.....
I have to catch up with your writes as soon as I have some free time...
Hugs
Jenni


Re: Swan Made Of Icing (User Rating: 1 )
by avanottingham on Friday, 5th November 2004 @ 08:34:04 AM AEST
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It just seems like the smallest gestures are always the best, doesn't it?

I thought this was really sweet, no pun intended!

~Ava


Re: Swan Made Of Icing (User Rating: 1 )
by Sirena_Degana on Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 10:39:39 AM AEST
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i melted into this poem...its so gorgeous!!!
Great write pixie!!!

blessed be
sirena




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