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Hiding Inside
Contributed by
lost_word
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Tuesday, 19th November 2002 @ 05:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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***** you / It's not me /
I don't care / You will see /
That i bleed / LIke you bleed /
***** you / It's hurts me /
I do care / You don't see /
That i bleed / Like you bleed /
***** them / They don't know /
They don't care / They don't see /
That i bleed / Like they bleed /
***** it / Just free me /
From this / MISERY / and show me /
That you care / Like i care /
That you bleed / Like i bleed /
I'm a person too !!!
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Re: Hiding Inside
(User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on
Tuesday, 19th November 2002 @ 05:39:14 AM AEST
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You seem very angry..and full of
pain..i can relate to feeling this way
this poem pains me ...i like reading
your poetry, and look forward to
reading more, i didn't really know
what to think about the / 's all through
the poem, i've not seen a poem done
in this way before, but it's creative
Thanks for sharing this one ..
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::. |
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Re: Hiding Inside
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by LOWMAN613 on
Wednesday, 20th November 2002 @ 03:37:59 AM AEST
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A little harsh but if thats your feeling than ....
It was a good poem!Christina |
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Re: Hiding Inside
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by boricuacd on
Friday, 11th April 2003 @ 05:08:06 PM AEST
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| good job |
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