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ONE TAKEN, THE OTHER LEFT

Contributed by emystar on Wednesday, 3rd November 2004 @ 10:49:59 PM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics

























SultryRose's Signatures






Now don't know whys
but know God's way is best.
Son-in-law may come
home tommorow
but for Sandy's Mom, sorrow

One taken, other left
Only know luvs way best.
Many hearts will cry
One left, another
left before her mother.

For our families will
sing songs of luv
rejoicing our heaven's
so brite.
Heaven-n-Earth touches
this nite.

Sing with our heavenly
angels.
Luv beams to shine.
Join uncle Bobby singing.
See grandma's gloriously
dancing.


For Jim, Sandy our
family of angels ring.




Copyright © emystar ... [ 2004-11-03 22:49:59]
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Re: ONE TAKEN, THE OTHER LEFT (User Rating: 1 )
by girish on Wednesday, 3rd November 2004 @ 11:29:22 PM AEST
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i feel very deep for the leaving of your daughter, i believe. may her soul rest in peace. i pray for that.

emy, i take all who come to me as my relations. i have many a sisters around the world you know and all call me brother.

so no one departs and even if they should they remain in our memory.

the poem was nice had a good feel for ur daughter. but the title should have been
"ONE TAKEN THE OTHER SEPERATED"


Re: ONE TAKEN, THE OTHER LEFT (User Rating: 1 )
by katyqueen35 on Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 01:11:46 AM AEST
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awwww great write.


Re: ONE TAKEN, THE OTHER LEFT (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 05:25:56 AM AEST
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awwww wow this was so sad, very moving,but written with such beauty,

takecare
pixie xx


Re: ONE TAKEN, THE OTHER LEFT (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 05:26:43 AM AEST
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so very sorry this has happened a beautiful poem my wishes of piece in your time of mourning to you and your family
Hugs
Michelle


Re: ONE TAKEN, THE OTHER LEFT (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 06:01:06 AM AEST
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I am sorry to hear of your loss Emy. Your spirit and outlook is so positive yet I can feel the grieving.

There is a reason for everything that happens. This I believe but it doesn't make it any the less painful.

Hang in there Em.

Kie


Re: ONE TAKEN, THE OTHER LEFT (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 06:06:12 AM AEST
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Oh Emm, You know how very deeply I feel for all that has happened in you life of late. I pray you continue having the strength to deal with it all.....
Hugs
Jenni


Re: ONE TAKEN, THE OTHER LEFT (User Rating: 1 )
by Lionel on Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 07:27:03 AM AEST
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Sorry about your loss, Emy.


Re: ONE TAKEN, THE OTHER LEFT (User Rating: 1 )
by mysticpoet on Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 08:09:32 AM AEST
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Beautiful Poem. I am very sorry to hear of the tragedy in your family. My prayers are with you all.


Re: ONE TAKEN, THE OTHER LEFT (User Rating: 1 )
by RhythmBndt on Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 07:07:41 PM AEST
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Your telling me to get over ***** & you can't even spell CENSORED right. Damn your frickin' lame.


Re: ONE TAKEN, THE OTHER LEFT (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 07:21:44 PM AEST
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Ignorence is bliss.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy


Re: ONE TAKEN, THE OTHER LEFT (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Saturday, 6th November 2004 @ 03:37:39 AM AEST
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Deeply touching..I am sorry for the loss..
my heart moves along with your rhyme.
hugs my friend..:-) venkat


Re: ONE TAKEN, THE OTHER LEFT (User Rating: 1 )
by sweetangeluk on Saturday, 6th November 2004 @ 06:05:55 AM AEST
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So sorry for your loss Emy.

A beautiful poem

Love Sweetangelukxxx


Re: ONE TAKEN, THE OTHER LEFT (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 8th November 2004 @ 11:12:24 PM AEST
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I jus want any one reading these comments such as Re: ONE TAKEN, THE OTHER LEFT (User Rating: 1)
by RhythmBndt on Thursday, November 04 2004 @ 19:07:41 CST
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Your telling me to get over ***** & you can't even spell CENSORED right. Damn your frickin' lame.
that one was someone trashing the site so that's why I wrote that ignorence is bliss.
luv, huggs, smiles even 2 them,
emy


Re: ONE TAKEN, THE OTHER LEFT (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenn2004 on Saturday, 27th November 2004 @ 07:02:45 PM AEST
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Beautiful poem Emy, im so sorry for your loss. Thank you for commenting on all my poems, it means alot to me. Comments like yours, motivates me to write more. Keep writing!! Much love and happiness to you always!! Love Jenn




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