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Looking For The Fall
Contributed by
Doriens_Picture
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Wednesday, 3rd November 2004 @ 10:42:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I have spent my whole life
Looking for the fall
The one that I feel would
Put an end to them all
And I could finally just be
With that right someone
Who makes me all that I am
Just to find her and make her
Fall for who I am and
I would be complete
I sometimes feel it’s you
But the timing is never right
And I don’t want to hurt you
Even if the timing will never be
I still cannot put us at risk
I would have you in my life
Anyway I can
Because I am so sure
That that right someone
Is you
But I know how
Things can get between you and me
So I will wait until
I think you are ready
Even if you will never be
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2004-11-03 22:42:55]
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Re: Looking For The Fall
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 3rd November 2004 @ 11:11:59 PM AEST
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Well I'd luv to see that the poem sucks, anyway this is a great as I understand what u r saying here and we all can relate in one way or the other.
Keep up the great writing.
luv, huggs, msny smiles,
emy |
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Re: Looking For The Fall
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by mylastwords on
Wednesday, 3rd November 2004 @ 11:28:42 PM AEST
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this poem far from sucks...i really like it...im sorry...
luv always xxooxx mylastwords xxooxx
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Re: Looking For The Fall
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by pixie on
Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 05:28:03 AM AEST
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hey dont put your poetry down like that , as I said about the other one this poem didn't suck, very far from, you have such talent and you write some lovely, romantic poetry,
takecare
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