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A Trip Within Myself
Contributed by
hoist1atca
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Wednesday, 3rd November 2004 @ 10:16:17 PM in AEST
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Today I took a trip within myself-
I wanted to see just who that I am-
Trying to understand just what I should be…
I cleared my head of things trivial to me-
My mind I turned into a single page-
All that remained was this empty mind of mine…
I saw the man that was inside of me-
He seemed confused as to who he was to be-
He knew not what he was to do…
Now I am locked within my own self-
Confused by who I should be and who I am-
I only wish there were someone to help me…
Is this all that I have come to be-
A man locked within his own mind-
Tortured by things best left behind…
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2004-11-03 22:16:17]
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Re: A Trip Within Myself
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by girish on
Wednesday, 3rd November 2004 @ 11:45:44 PM AEST
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hai friend i have a solution for your problem. many of my proms express the way to attain goals even remaining handicapped or remaining confused. read them if you can or tell me we can chat one day mail me for that
the reason can be, you are overwhelmed with knowledge in different areas |
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Re: A Trip Within Myself
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 3rd November 2004 @ 11:48:48 PM AEST
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U r a great writer as we all can relate some time or other in life. A masterpeice that we all ask at times.
luv, huggs, good writer,
emy |
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Re: A Trip Within Myself
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by pixie on
Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 05:30:38 AM AEST
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I agree this si very true, written well, alot of expression and feeling in your write, which I'm sure most of us can relate to,
takecare,
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Re: A Trip Within Myself
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 07:13:42 AM AEST
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I think we all do that occasionally, but lately I never seem to come up with any acceptable answers. I used to know who I was. I was strong within myself. If you ever want to chat IM me at ritaharrison7270@sbcglobal.net. It is also my email addie.
Rita |
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