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What Love Can Realy Do

Contributed by iPaRtYiNpInK12 on Wednesday, 3rd November 2004 @ 09:17:16 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



Up until these last couple weeks,
My life has been a huge mess,
I couldnt do anything right,
and not one guy would treat me right,

I thought My life would never change,
it would always be a cloud with out a sun shine coming its way,
I lived in the dark where it always rained,
and everyday I prayed for a angel to come take me away,

I always dreamed of that angel coming,
floating down on a fluffy white cloud,
watching the wings wave up and down,
I pictured it everyday in my mind,
But never once was that image real,

I finnaly gave up on life and all,
on my friends and family,
I didnt care at all,
all my As went down the drain,
I could see my pain,
it always stayed,

My grades were low,
and i had lost all hope,
but then i saw my dream come true,
an angel can and that angel was you,

You didnt have wings or come on a cloud,
You just saw and liked me,
You saved my life when you asked me out,
and now I can thank you for everthing else,

When you walked by the sun begined to shine,
the rain went away and so did the pain,
I feel so perfect because I know to you I am,


Everyday I get lost in your eyes,
Everyday I fall even more in love,
I never want to let you leave,
because I know your the only thing that I need,

You bring out the sun,
Take away the pain,
you went through it all,
You knew what to say,
I opened my heart,
and let you in,
you helded me close,
and wouldnt let anything else in,

Now I know with out you I would be dead,
Maybe not my body but my spirit and hopes,
with you I have dreams and I can actually see,

I thank you so much everyday in my heart,
I am so in love,
I just dont need anything else.




Copyright © iPaRtYiNpInK12 ... [ 2004-11-03 21:17:16]
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Re: What Love Can Realy Do (User Rating: 1 )
by girish on Wednesday, 3rd November 2004 @ 11:32:49 PM AEST
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SPELL "REALLY" NOT REALY
so much feel


Re: What Love Can Realy Do (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 12:29:30 AM AEST
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wow a powerfull angel kicken write here.
A masterpeice of heaven on Earth. No one can walk away from this write without hope and a glow in their heart.
luv, huggs smiles,
emy




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