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You keep me awake.
Contributed by
shadowsofmyheart
on
Wednesday, 3rd November 2004 @ 08:56:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
insomniac
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I don’t want to go to sleep.
I don’t want to wake up with my broken heart.
I have no reason to get up and go.
Nothing to look forward too.
No one who cares,
No one there.
All I want is love.
Four letters that have consumed my mind.
I cant think of anything else.
Its all I want.
Your all I need.
I need to show you.
I need to tell you.
Cut open my heart and let it spill out.
All the feelings inside of me,
All for you.
I’d shove my notebook in your face,
so you could read the countless pages devoted to you.
I cant stop this,
I cant control this.
Why can’t you see,
Its all for you.
Staying up late.
All though the night.
It just makes me worse.
I have more time to think about us.
How we never will be.
More time to hate
Its just my life wasting.
But you'll never see this.
You’ll never know.
Just tell me.
And this might stop.
Your why I wake up in the morning,
Until realize I might as well go back to my nightmares,
There nothing compared to my life.
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shadowsofmyheart
... [
2004-11-03 20:56:11]
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Re: You keep me awake.
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by travisk on
Wednesday, 3rd November 2004 @ 11:44:33 PM AEST
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| I've waded through quite a bit of bull***** on this site, and I'm glad to see your poem as the resting rock on which I can perch and confidently say that it is quite good and appreciated my friend. |
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Re: You keep me awake.
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by MickeyPigKnuckles on
Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 10:15:22 AM AEST
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| What an awesome way to display an empty hurting heart missing the most important element of life and living. You have created a master piece of poetic word art for all to see and feel through your well chosen words of poetry. I am so Honored to be amongst such Great talented poet's. Your new reading fan. MickeyPigKnuckles :o) |
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