|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Lost Causes
Contributed by
SuicideParty
on
Wednesday, 3rd November 2004 @ 08:53:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
|
I could comfort you, if you ask me
It's not like I actually care
But if you need me to listen to what you would say
Then I'll let you believe I'll be there
In the long run, I guess you'll accept it
In the end I won't care if you don't
But I beg of you, just this one time, if you will
Do not ask me to stay...because I won't
You could hold me from now to your death day
You could scream all that you've left unspoken
You could mummur the words that I've begged you to say
As it falls, they won't fix what you've broken
The time trickles by me, unnoticed
This place is so dismal and bare
I look for the miracle promised to me
I'm not shocked when I find it's not there
When my last breath escapes as a sigh from my lips
And my fear takes a form all it's own
I will die with a smile...I've nothing to fear
Hell can't be much worse than I've known
Copyright ©
SuicideParty
... [
2004-11-03 20:53:37]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Lost Causes
(User Rating: 1 )
by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 12:08:04 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| i love this, its awesome!!!!! |
|
|
Re: Lost Causes
(User Rating: 1 )
by DesperateSoul on
Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 03:40:26 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
When I read this the first words were
"This is Good!!"
Keep writing always!! |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
