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Invisible
Contributed by
Crimson_Rose
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Wednesday, 3rd November 2004 @ 07:41:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I'm the no one you see,
The loner lurking the crowded halls
Faces give me unwanted glares
Alone in the cold, it feels hallow
Invisible,
I want to escape from this prison
This place is a never escaping hell
I scream a spoken word, which no one hears
I walk solo,
On my own, without anyone.
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Crimson_Rose
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2004-11-03 19:41:59]
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Re: Invisible
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by TedHuggableBare on
Wednesday, 3rd November 2004 @ 09:56:18 PM AEST
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| Sometimes we all become invisible to others. Only if the pain in our hearts can be invisible when it comes to aching. I feel like I am a lone wolf and have been called that in my lifetime. I open up, but still I walk alone it seems. Nice write. |
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Re: Invisible
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by pixie on
Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 05:41:03 AM AEST
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sad write, sometimes I feel invisable to the rest of the world and could easily just fade away, a well expressed write,
takecare,
pixie xx |
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