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Modern Day Suicide
Contributed by
TwEeK
on
Wednesday, 3rd November 2004 @ 05:35:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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i am
the living dead
i walk the halls you thrive in
and sit apon your chair
you cant stop me from this so-called "Suicide"
the carpet of blood in which i lay
silently kissing deaths lips, taken to the angels above
this modern day suicidal pleasure
razor blades lick my skin, tearing veins
the harder my heart pounds, the faster it flows.
leave a note, taped to my locker
written with such calligraphy, etched with depression and deep sadness
i walk the halls
a dead body, still on its feet
Copyright ©
TwEeK
... [
2004-11-03 17:35:55]
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Re: Modern Day Suicide
(User Rating: 1 )
by WorthlesSanity666 on
Wednesday, 3rd November 2004 @ 09:34:08 PM AEST
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| I loved your poem. It was great. i'm sorry.. the good word juice is dried up i me, I fear, but your poem rocked. I loved all the metaphore/imagery/simile stuff you used. I liked the way it didn't ramble on. It was straight and to the point, but not exactly short... I'm too tired, i ramble. Good job. Hope things are perkin' up fer you, though.... :-/ |
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Re: Modern Day Suicide
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by pixie on
Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 05:43:49 AM AEST
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wow, ana amazing write,
takecare,
pixie xx |
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