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I CAN'T
Contributed by
docpardue
on
Wednesday, 3rd November 2004 @ 04:57:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
war
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For you it was the News................For me it was the day-to-day.
You called for Pizzas...........................I called for Medics.
You watched Construction.......I performed Destruction.
You watched children Play...............I watched them Die.
You learned of Life................................I learned of Death.
Your passion was to Succeed........Mine was to Survive.
You served Dinner...........................I served my Country.
You never left home.....................I can't find my way home.
You Forgot..............................................................I Can't
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docpardue
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2004-11-03 16:57:46]
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Re: I CAN'T
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by XxNights_ChildxX on
Wednesday, 3rd November 2004 @ 05:15:57 PM AEST
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Brilliant, absolutely brilliant, sounds like the 911 incident... great write.
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Re: I CAN'T
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 3rd November 2004 @ 05:20:42 PM AEST
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Thanks for sharing this, Kerry.... touching write..
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Re: I CAN'T
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by n2dep2care on
Wednesday, 3rd November 2004 @ 05:38:11 PM AEST
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Very powerful write! Expressed extremely well.
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