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In the Middle
Contributed by
crazylady
on
Wednesday, 3rd November 2004 @ 04:25:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Caught between
One love or another.
Both seem to be
More than a brother.
But life is long,
And choices wrong.
They make me want to
Duck and cover.
The result is inevitable
And I can’t escape
Pain and sorrow
It’s my fate.
My life is painful
Can’t you see?
Can’t you see
The pain you’re causing me?
I can’t see the answer to this endless life.
All I see is sorrow, grief, and strife.
My life just keeps going when I want it to end.
All I ever wanted or needed was a friend.
Someone who could encourage me to
Keep trying when I felt like I should quit.
But my friend wouldn’t let me.
That answer’s not fit.
My heart would be happy because her in it I’d keep,
But my heart is broken and I can’t help but weep.
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crazylady
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2004-11-03 16:25:48]
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Re: In the Middle
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by theMoth on
Wednesday, 3rd November 2004 @ 04:36:44 PM AEST
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Given two choices I would
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Re: In the Middle
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by crazylady on
Wednesday, 3rd November 2004 @ 04:43:45 PM AEST
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| lol. im over both of them now. im new to your-poetry.com and so i figured id post some of my favorite works. i want as many opinions on all of thme as i can so i can improve my writing. i want 2 b a writer when i grow up. so im already practicing. thanx for your comments! |
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