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Normal Suicide
Contributed by
TwEeK
on
Wednesday, 3rd November 2004 @ 04:19:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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words for me,
cannot describe
how suicide seems normal.
i have seen it
and felt it
so many times before, that it all seems ok.
teetering on the ledge of life, the ledge of a tall building
having that steak knife, poised at your heart
writting incessant words to people who wont even care!
i laugh at myself for how stupid it all is
purity in death, when blood can badly stain
Suicide = an unbalanced amount of unresolved pain
pleasure in seeing the blood drip sounds psychotic
just your regular emo kid
think nothing of me...it...whoever i am
defeated down to the final blow
crave the attention with a suicide bombing
life left so incomplete
how can Suicide seem normal to me?
Copyright ©
TwEeK
... [
2004-11-03 16:19:10] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Normal Suicide
(User Rating: 1 ) by crazylady on
Wednesday, 3rd November 2004 @ 04:28:59 PM AEST (User
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OMG THAT IS SO AWESOME! I KNOW JUST HOW YOU FEEL! i love the poem. ive been there before. and i know how it feels to write something about how you really feel on the inside and no1 give a crap. (happens daily) lol. but its a great poem and i can relate to it. keep up the good work!
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Re: Normal Suicide
(User Rating: 1 ) by savedbydeath on
Wednesday, 3rd November 2004 @ 04:30:58 PM AEST (User
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great write,the way u spell seems like ur so young,dont worry i'm 16 and sometimes suicide seems normal to me and so difficult to understand to others,dont worry when u get older things will feel different and u'll have a better understanding of life and how important it is not to be a coward,stay alive is my advice to u,keep up the great work!
savdebydeath
ps if u need someone to talk to u can talk to me anytime u want |
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Re: Normal Suicide
(User Rating: 1 ) by screwup on
Wednesday, 3rd November 2004 @ 04:32:20 PM AEST (User
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suicide is normal to me too... great post...
Deanna |
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Re: Normal Suicide
(User Rating: 1 ) by Sirena_Degana on
Wednesday, 3rd November 2004 @ 05:28:21 PM AEST (User
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oh....i think i could relate to this one....very good write
blessed be
sirena |
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Re: Normal Suicide
(User Rating: 1 ) by WorthlesSanity666 on
Wednesday, 3rd November 2004 @ 09:27:43 PM AEST (User
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I know what you mean... I read tons of suicide threats... it just seems like it can't be real, yet like it's normal, like it's a part of everyday life... God poem.
Felix The Great |
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