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°°°Ring Of Two Colors°°°
Contributed by
OreO
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Tuesday, 19th November 2002 @ 02:40:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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With this ring my true love, i give to you
From my heart and soul, not one color but two
The silver is for the locked love we share
The gold mixed with it matches with care
·..·
It's round and unique, it's one of a kind
If you look at it just right, It'll flow through your mind
The swirls and markings say "I Love You"
With this ring my true love, i give to you
·..·
5 diamonds laid nicely deep inside
That's our lucky number, yours~n~mine
With this ring i give you from my heart and soul
My true love of eternity, i will always love you so
·..·
The months we have cherished to date
With this ring it is our destiny and fate
With this ring my true love, i give to you
From my heart and soul, not one color but two
Copyright ©
OreO
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2002-11-19 02:40:00]
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Re: °°°Ring Of Two Colors°°°
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by LOWMAN613 on
Tuesday, 19th November 2002 @ 02:59:21 AM AEST
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Oreo,
Very nicely done,I really like this,what a very nice treasure to have! Christina |
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Re: °°°Ring Of Two Colors°°°
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by Dot on
Tuesday, 19th November 2002 @ 08:17:46 AM AEST
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| Hi Sandwich cookie- ha. I love your name-Oreo. This is a very nice poem-sounds like a very special lady in your life. Be happy. Dot |
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Re: °°°Ring Of Two Colors°°°
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by Fwog on
Tuesday, 19th November 2002 @ 08:24:11 AM AEST
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Hi OreO,
Not my favourite of yours, but still an enjoyable read.
Some memories linger clearer and longer than others.
I hope your ring of two colors brings cherished memories.
Hugz,
Fwog
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Re: °°°Ring Of Two Colors°°°
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by Rakerman1999 on
Tuesday, 19th November 2002 @ 09:38:40 AM AEST
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| You put a lot of emotion into this one. What a beautiful love poem ! :o) Larry |
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Re: °°°Ring Of Two Colors°°°
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Tuesday, 19th November 2002 @ 10:23:52 AM AEST
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Very nice!!! I like this....it's an interesting comparison...
Jenni |
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Re: °°°Ring Of Two Colors°°°
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by Sarah22 on
Monday, 16th December 2002 @ 01:05:29 AM AEST
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your poems are
worth the reading .
keep your dreams
and goals alive .
may god bless
you @ your family
over the holidays |
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Re: °°°Ring Of Two Colors°°°
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by Ilhar on
Tuesday, 17th December 2002 @ 06:48:52 PM AEST
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| i really enjoyed this thank you for sharing |
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Re: °°°Ring Of Two Colors°°°
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by Cynthia on
Sunday, 29th December 2002 @ 03:21:45 PM AEST
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| I love this poem Oreo. I brought me back to when my husband and I first got married. Thanx for all the wonderful comments on my poems. Keep writing my friend. *S* Cynthia |
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