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Go Away
Contributed by
screwup
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Wednesday, 3rd November 2004 @ 03:34:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I don't wanna be left alone
but that's what you've done
you let me drown
all alone in the rain
swallowed by my pain
and you wonder why you are not my mother
because you were never really there
life with you is so unfair
your insults and your curses
make me feel like I'm not a person
nothing to you
and to let me know its true
you are not a parent
not to me
why can't you ever
LEAVE ME BE
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screwup
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2004-11-03 15:34:19]
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Re: Go Away
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by crazylady on
Wednesday, 3rd November 2004 @ 04:00:32 PM AEST
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| boy i know how that goes! its tough being a kid and having parents that never leave you alone! my mom knows more about me than i realize which is NOT a good thing. i hate having parents that are always in my business and i can relate to your poem. great job! : C ) |
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Re: Go Away
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by kidpoet_213 on
Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 10:47:25 AM AEST
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I've never had this prob... but I can certainly understand... it's sad and tragic that such as this happens...
Good write...
~Donna~ |
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Re: Go Away
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by deathdrop on
Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 01:35:25 PM AEST
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yikes!
this is a very painfu and emotional poem.
i hope that she does leave you alone! |
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