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Without Life
Contributed by
savedbydeath
on
Wednesday, 3rd November 2004 @ 02:52:54 PM in AEST
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Everything is empty
everything is done
i'm so dam empty
nothing was ever done
i lay alone
in my grave
i was always alone
i was never brave
(chorus)
i'm dead but alive
without life
i'm reaching out for a knife
i strive
for no life
i feel dead but i'm alive
alive without life
wihtout life
whats inside of me
i cannot see
not even you
so i dont ask you to
nothing will make me
feel the way i did
why cant you see
i'm just a kid
i have no life
my only hope
is for the rope
around my neck,no life
i'm an empty soul
i have no shadow
is this your fault
didnt ya know
i'm without life
(chorus)
i'm without life(x4)
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savedbydeath
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2004-11-03 14:52:54]
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Re: Without Life
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by theMoth on
Wednesday, 3rd November 2004 @ 04:45:50 PM AEST
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"I'm without life"
really resonates,
especially with how
you seperated it.
Good write.
--Mothy |
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Re: Without Life
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by Stonedraider23 on
Wednesday, 3rd November 2004 @ 05:05:20 PM AEST
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| good write dont u go and hope for a rope unless its tyin you down to the bed lol keep these good ones comin |
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Re: Without Life
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 25th February 2006 @ 01:56:08 PM AEST
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beautiful...really awesome and i like it
- Beth - |
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