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Slip Away
Contributed by
surge_joebot
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Wednesday, 3rd November 2004 @ 02:49:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
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You've seen me sitting on the cold tin roof,
Crying in the rain, bleeding up so high,
Screaming out so loud.
You've seen me walk the empty hollow night,
Alone in the dark, thinking to myself,
Singing just so softly.
You've seen me out in the fields,
Evil in my eyes, murder on my mind,
Dying on broken hopes.
You've seen me at my lowest moment,
On my knees, infront of my dead love,
Crying out in pain.
I've broken down, I've gone through hell.
You don't know what it's like.
You don't understand why your sad when I am.
You just want to help,
You just want to be there for me.
You'll never hurt me, you've seen me sad too often.
So you live to be there for me...
To make sure that at least one person loves me.
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2004-11-03 14:49:27]
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Re: Slip Away
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 4th September 2005 @ 04:06:29 PM AEST
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| i almost want to cry as I'm reading this. I hate depresseion - going through it, seeing other people go through it. It reminds me of when I cried all the time....when I was always in pain. I hope your find your way out of it like I did. good luck |
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Re: Slip Away
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by dh_guitarist on
Thursday, 4th May 2006 @ 11:13:11 AM AEST
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| this was a very sad write.. as intended.. a lot of emotions.. great write |
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