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Cloudburst
Contributed by
philxcool
on
Wednesday, 3rd November 2004 @ 01:16:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Rain, sleet and snow
Everywhere I go,
The temperamental clouds
Torture those below.
Snow, rain and sleet
Running in the street,
A painful switch ensues;
My head below my feet.
Sleet, snow and rain
A respite from the pain,
To recover from falling
In the previous refrain.
Rain, sleet and snow
Wind blowing to and fro,
Dejected, I surrender
Soaked from head to toe.
Copyright ©
philxcool
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2004-11-03 13:16:50]
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Re: Cloudburst
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by alyssakoren_03 on
Saturday, 6th November 2004 @ 03:35:40 PM AEST
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| moo *mad cow* pardon my french. have we met before darling? i happen to love the rain. peace out home boy. |
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Re: Cloudburst
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 17th February 2005 @ 07:37:00 AM AEST
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An interesting rhyme scheme -AA-BA.
I very much am a fan of snow, yet seldom have the opportunity to take it for granted.
Terra Australis is rather, well... dry!
A lovely take on weather! |
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