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EVERY ONE I KNOW GO'S AWAY IN THE END
Contributed by
tears_of_blood
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Wednesday, 3rd November 2004 @ 12:39:18 PM in AEST
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What have I become my sweetie friend?
Every thing I do takes you far there away every day
Try to not think of the past but its still there
The pain and tears that fall are still all over the walls
Your face has never looked the same scene that day
What have I become my sweetie friend?
Why do I take the good away from people every day?
Why when I talk do tears just fall my way
Is it the words I say or just the pain so deep inside that I hide?
I try to kill it all away but I remember every thing
All the tears I cried when I was a little boy
All the screams I screamed when she took my manhood away
It wasn’t right the things you did to me I was only 7 at the time
So every single day I have to try and push those screams away
What you have done to me has made me someone I don’t want to be
No one trust me any more cause I can’t give them a reason to
I end up hurting my girlfriend with every word I say
Cause she doesn’t know if it’s just words I say or the real thing
All I wanted to say is thanks for taking my life away when I was just a little boy.
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Re: EVERY ONE I KNOW GO'S AWAY IN THE END
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 3rd November 2004 @ 12:43:12 PM AEST
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a very disturbed write, filled with pain and torment, I am so sorry for what you had to go through when you were so young, no-one should have to go through that as an adult let alone a child, *hugs*
takecare
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Re: EVERY ONE I KNOW GO'S AWAY IN THE END
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by PhantomVampyress on
Wednesday, 3rd November 2004 @ 12:45:45 PM AEST
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wow this is good but you can definately feel the pain and torment!! great job
Peace and hope
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Re: EVERY ONE I KNOW GO'S AWAY IN THE END
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 3rd November 2004 @ 01:07:31 PM AEST
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very very sad
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