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At Last You'll Be Free

Contributed by dalamar on Wednesday, 3rd November 2004 @ 09:08:06 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



At last You'll Be Free

We know a boy who got picked on everyday
all the jocks and prep kept telling him he was gay
his mom always yelled his dad had died
every night he fell alsleep while he cried

he got made fun of for wearing dirty clothes
and for all the pimples that were on his nose
he was fed up with it he felt alone
so he quickly made his way home

he ran into his house but nobody was there
it came to the poor boy that nobody cared
he ran upstairs time went by so fast
as he took all the pills and drank from his glass

Then time slowed down as the pills took their effect
all he could do was lie on his back
and it was there he thought at last i'll be free
all those kids will quit making fun of me

he closed his eyes and started to die
as his life flashed before his eyes
he saw his mom dying all alone
on the bed right in his home
this image scared the boy it made him want to cry
it made him think he was ready to die

he tried to stand up but fell back on the floor
for he couldn't use he legs anymore
he struggled and tried to cry and save himself
he couldn't reach the phone that was up on the shelf

then suddenly the room became dark and cold
a feeling for him that was way to old
and then he cried at last I'll be free
all those kids will quit making fun of me.




Copyright © dalamar ... [ 2004-11-03 09:08:06]
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Re: At Last You'll Be Free (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Wednesday, 3rd November 2004 @ 10:01:10 AM AEST
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a very sad write, well expressed,

pixie xx


Re: At Last You'll Be Free (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Wednesday, 3rd November 2004 @ 10:28:59 AM AEST
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Heartwrenching...really heartwrenching. I'm almost in tears here. Your spelling needs some cleaning up, but this is very moving.
Stitch


Re: At Last You'll Be Free (User Rating: 1 )
by joe-joe on Wednesday, 3rd November 2004 @ 01:16:00 PM AEST
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It's sad how low other people can make someone feel, even to death of themselves... nice write...


Re: At Last You'll Be Free (User Rating: 1 )
by dalamar on Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 09:33:23 AM AEST
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this one came to me after i saw a sophomore making fun of a 7th grader.




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