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Addict
Contributed by
bonita2689
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Wednesday, 3rd November 2004 @ 08:30:58 AM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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A kiss ever-fading
angelic yet deadly
lustrous and beautiful
forever ineptly
the cursed taste
lingers on my lips
mocking and haunting
suffocating and haunting
always bleeding
flooding and seething
choke me sweetly
I'm dying yet breathing
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bonita2689
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2004-11-03 08:30:58]
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Re: Addict
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 3rd November 2004 @ 08:32:36 AM AEST
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mmmm that was brilliant, great write,
takecare
pixie xx |
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Re: Addict
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by Red_October on
Wednesday, 3rd November 2004 @ 11:07:12 AM AEST
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| Another good one. Very emotional spiral to the end. Tiffany J. (Red_October) |
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Re: Addict
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by bonita2689 on
Wednesday, 3rd November 2004 @ 11:22:25 AM AEST
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revision: suffocating and taunting... oops sorry
-Kristin |
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Re: Addict
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by girish on
Wednesday, 3rd November 2004 @ 12:15:01 PM AEST
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you are dying but breathing only because of the initial kiss you got it`s never fading
nice write |
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