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insomnia
Contributed by
krisseee
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Wednesday, 3rd November 2004 @ 06:38:40 AM in AEST
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i cant sleep
my lake of worries too deep
im weak
the canyon of unrest too wide to leap
beep beep its my alarm clock
the sun seaps in, the birds cheep
the soul inside my body weeps
the mountain i call daytime so steep
another night without sleep
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krisseee
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2004-11-03 06:38:40]
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Re: insomnia
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by THORN on
Wednesday, 3rd November 2004 @ 06:44:28 AM AEST
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That's a great write, nice rhymes
Cheers,
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Re: insomnia
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 3rd November 2004 @ 07:01:50 AM AEST
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wow, very good write on insomnia,
takecare
pixie xx |
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Re: insomnia
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by bonita2689 on
Wednesday, 3rd November 2004 @ 09:20:49 AM AEST
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| nice... I like the repetition of the "eep" |
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Re: insomnia
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by AliB on
Wednesday, 3rd November 2004 @ 10:53:55 AM AEST
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Great write, I also love how you rhymed this.
Well done.
Ali xx |
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