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bed of roses
Contributed by
wild_girl121
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Wednesday, 3rd November 2004 @ 12:19:33 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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im alive and its doesnt matter ... because no one cares .
im in a frozen bed of thorns ,and you know how it is and
you told me whatever im out... well guess what so am i ,
but i dont know how to feel... am i supose to be numb and
not care what you say or think... or am i supose to cry myself
to sleep wishing that i never kissed you? i dont know what to
do... i am numb and my heart is pounding from frustration .....
what i think i am holding back and you know i wont
hold back forever .....
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Re: bed of roses
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by loveisendless on
Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 10:42:48 PM AEST
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LIVING WITH LOVE ISN'T EASY,& GIVING IN IS JUST AS HARD AS IT IS BELIEVING!! IT COMES & IT GOES,SOME SO FAST OTHERS REAL SLOW!!! LET THE THOUGHTS IN YOUR HEAD GRAB HOLD,BECAUSE LOVE WILL OTHERWISE TURN ALL RED & FADE AS FAR AWAY FROM BEING GOLD!!!! YOU WRITE SO TRUE,IT HAS TO FEEL SO RIGHT & SHOULD LIFT YOU OUTTA YOUR BLUES!!!!! GREAT WRITE!!!!!!
DAN!!!!!!! |
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Re: bed of roses
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by tears_of_blood on
Thursday, 17th November 2005 @ 07:22:11 PM AEST
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not having what you want and feeling lost is hard to do the poem was good your getting really good at writing thanks for saying that on my poems aswell.
brad |
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