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Contributed by
tedhuggablebare
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Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 10:20:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Like a ship on an ocean
You have my complete devotion
Like the light of a gifted star
I close my eye and there you are
Like the colors of a rainbow
You keep my love aglow
Like a promise one should keep
You're my dreams when I sleep
Like the feeling in my heart
I shall always love you near or far
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Re: Like...
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 10:25:36 PM AEST
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Luv your pen name.
The poem is a masterpeice of awesome beautiy that flows straite to the heart of that reads.
When we are long gone from this planet these words will still soar.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Like...
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by polarum on
Monday, 4th April 2011 @ 02:39:57 PM AEST
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| I like the rhythm in this poem. The words could almost be the lyrics of a song. The only line I might change is the first one, eg 'Like my ship on the ocean'. Just an idea. |
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