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Dying Nation
Contributed by
essentially9
on
Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 10:10:22 PM in AEST
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Dying Nation
I watch the nation die
As the sheets of paper
Cast the fate of life
Over what really matters
One state at a time
If you stand for nothing
You'll fall for anything
This nation is split
Between truth and lies
Neither one is right
And we fall divided
By our own choice
To play God with life
The red in the sea
Ruins what could be
The stupidity of falling
Divided and for nothing
But for what you wanted
Damn everyone else
For ever living
And wanting better
Copyright ©
essentially9
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2004-11-02 22:10:22]
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Re: Dying Nation
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 10:23:29 PM AEST
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Powerful and exceptionally expressed.
You've captured some deep emotions here.
Well done!!
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Re: Dying Nation
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by n2dep2care on
Wednesday, 3rd November 2004 @ 10:02:24 AM AEST
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| Awesome write E9! Extremely strong and convincing. Well done! |
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Re: Dying Nation
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by ArdRi79 on
Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 03:26:21 AM AEST
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| THis made me feel your passion for your country, Ive never read anything from americans beond dogmatic patriotism before this was moving it changed how I view americans, this one is something special congratulations |
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Re: Dying Nation
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by Elena on
Sunday, 7th November 2004 @ 03:28:20 AM AEST
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If you stand for nothing
You'll fall for anything
I think these lines sum this up very well. Good write and I am very happy someone whose eyes are not wide shut took the trouble to say something. You are certainly essential now. Thank you.
E |
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Re: Dying Nation
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by Fluffhead on
Sunday, 7th November 2004 @ 09:36:00 AM AEST
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| Nice write. very powerful |
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Re: Dying Nation
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 7th November 2004 @ 03:27:03 PM AEST
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OUCH!,,,there is nothing like saying what you really feel,
Powerful....well done!! |
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Re: Dying Nation
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by Willofree on
Monday, 8th November 2004 @ 06:26:33 PM AEST
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There's power and conviction in your words. Sometimes we care so much it is very frustrating, Your caring comes through.
Powerful write
Willofree |
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Re: Dying Nation
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by Red_October on
Monday, 8th November 2004 @ 09:14:44 PM AEST
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| True to life confession of a poetic soul. Very well penned. Tiffany J. (Red_October) |
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Re: Dying Nation
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by namesaretaken on
Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 03:18:07 PM AEST
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What can I say that has not been already said
my fav lines would be
If you stand for nothing
You'll fall for anything
Awsome I really liked this one |
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Re: Dying Nation
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by TheVoice on
Friday, 19th November 2004 @ 10:14:31 PM AEST
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Very heartfelt write. I love it
The Voice
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Re: Dying Nation
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by assassinatorgirl on
Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 11:24:00 PM AEST
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| nice! gj once again =) |
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