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No One Knows
Contributed by
taryn
on
Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 09:16:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I feel like a useless being,
walking around,
appearing to have drive and ambition.
Im fooling everyone,
they see a happy person,
with the big fake smile on my face.
Nobody knows Im gone,
not my best friend,
no one at all.
Ive been killed,
attacked by harsh words,
stabbed by their actions.
Im tired of it,
sick of the crying and screaming.
Sure you see my figure here,
thinking everythings fine.
Dont act suprised if,
if tomorrow Im not here because,
no one knows.
Copyright ©
taryn
... [
2004-11-02 21:16:06]
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Re: No One Knows
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by Doriens_Picture on
Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 09:21:35 PM AEST
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| i dont think i have ever related to another poem the same way a great write with a perfect length and style |
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Re: No One Knows
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by hoist1atca on
Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 10:16:22 PM AEST
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A very strong poem-
Do not dispair over meningless fools that use words to inflict pain-
All who know and love you will come to miss you of this I am sure.
There is only one of you and that makes you special.
Joe |
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Re: No One Knows
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Wednesday, 3rd November 2004 @ 02:31:50 AM AEST
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| awesome! |
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Re: No One Knows
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 3rd November 2004 @ 06:49:35 AM AEST
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i feel like this sometimes, I think we all put on smiles to the outside world,so we dont have to explain why we feel down...very deep and emotional write,
pixie xx |
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