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Free To Be
Contributed by
DragonLuvSong
on
Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 07:57:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I am free to be-
whatever pleases me
There is no more-
control in store
I have my life-
back from strife
No longer held-
but not beheld
I am free to be-
and no one with me
There is no more-
other to live for
I have my life-
and alone suffice
Copyright ©
DragonLuvSong
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2004-11-02 19:57:42]
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Re: Free To Be
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by a_bear on
Monday, 8th November 2004 @ 10:16:18 PM AEST
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I saw the zero on the comments ...it cried out to me..
I liked your poem and hate zeros..lol |
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Re: Free To Be
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by Ezekiel on
Sunday, 2nd January 2005 @ 12:15:12 AM AEST
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Nice rhythm in the poem. Your freedom is accessible in both the words you choose and the economic use of words.
God's peace.
Craig |
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