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lost
Contributed by
luckigurl
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Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 07:21:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I'm falling in love with you
I saw the first clue
That's how i kow its true
Dont know what to do
You say you love her too
Am i thinking way to out of my head?
Maybe i was miss lead
Losing you is what i dread
But I'll never forget the words you said
You made the choice to be with crystal
Right then i felt so hurt, like being shot with a pistol
Please, just always know
Hope you relize what you let go
I will always love you though
Even if you made me feel so low
Copyright ©
luckigurl
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2004-11-02 19:21:51]
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Re: lost
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by shisgirl on
Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 08:05:57 PM AEST
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| THAT WAS NICE... |
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Re: lost
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by n2dep2care on
Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 09:45:21 PM AEST
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Wonderful flow, high emotion. I liked this very much.
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Re: lost
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 3rd November 2004 @ 01:46:23 AM AEST
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| I can relate to this, Hopefully in the end he will be with lol, if that is still what you want lol he will probley soon see what he missed out on lol well Good luck and Great Write !! |
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