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Untitled
Contributed by
kandyklown999
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Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 05:30:10 PM in AEST
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Finally a feeling, a pain I can take.
It's only a habit, but this I can break.
It doesnt take over me, you dont need to cry.
I'm not even addicted, dont you see why?
I can control it, I can take charge.
It may grow a little, but never to large.
A release, a touch, unlike anyother.
Gentle and calming, like one from a mother.
A cure, a strange process of healing.
an undescribable yet relaxing feeling.
Copyright ©
kandyklown999
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2004-11-02 17:30:10]
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Re: Untitled
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by theMoth on
Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 07:28:25 PM AEST
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Looks like one of Dorian's.
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Re: Untitled
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by WorthlesSanity666 on
Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 07:32:59 PM AEST
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| Hmhm, you may think so, hun! ;-) Lovely poem, though. It flowed really well and I loved the rhyming, it just seemed so natural. Great job. |
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