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What's the Point?
Contributed by
LayDownPlayDead
on
Monday, 18th November 2002 @ 08:30:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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what's the point of trying,
when all you do is wrong
what's the point of crying,
if no one hears your song
what's the point of happiness,
if it only lasts a short time
what's the point of sadness,
if it just ruins your life
what's the point of seeing,
when everything's a lie
what's the poing of believing,
when all you ask is why
what's the point of life,
filled with pain and strife
what's the point of me,
filled with sadness and misery
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2002-11-18 20:30:00]
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Re: What's the Point?
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by OreO on
Monday, 18th November 2002 @ 10:53:00 PM AEST
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I really enjoyed this one alot
It's rhyme's so beautifully and
shows so many emotions
Thanks for sharing this one
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.
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Re: What's the Point?
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by Rakerman1999 on
Wednesday, 20th November 2002 @ 11:51:35 AM AEST
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| The point is to rise above it all and spit right in it's eye...Great write Autumn! :o) Larry |
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Re: What's the Point?
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 4th December 2002 @ 10:21:41 PM AEST
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| Marc: I really enjoyed reading that poem. I think that I enjoy it best when the write chooses to rhyme their poems such as that. Besides the clear talent, the words are very sad as your poems appear to be. |
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