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Should I Always Listen To My Conscience?
Contributed by
Dan666
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Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 03:07:04 PM in AEST
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My conscience tells me this and that,
I sometimes stop so we can chat,
It tells me things, that i should listen,
Please tell me if I should listen,
I always do stop and think,
Usually decide in a blink,
It's always there I cant escape,
But I never see it, it goes without a trace,
Ok conscience, I am listening,
You are yelling, you are whistling,
Please stop it, I'm trying to sleep,
I know your for me, but this is cheap,
So tell me please, 'cos there's a knock
Should I listen, or should I block?
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Dan666
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2004-11-02 15:07:04]
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Re: Should I Always Listen To My Conscience?
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 03:22:13 PM AEST
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Hey Dan! if you can do that straight into the pooter maybe i should change "granny" to "Danny" is a rap star!
in my poem!
now you've got talent!
Johnny. |
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Re: Should I Always Listen To My Conscience?
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by AliB on
Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 03:22:32 PM AEST
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Oh My God!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Daniel, I am absolutely amazed by this. You should definitely listen to your conscience, I think that's why we are getting on so well!
Please keep writing Daniel, you are so bloody good at it, even though I'm your mum and am very proud.
I truely loved this, well done.
Ali xx |
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Re: Should I Always Listen To My Conscience?
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by Dawny on
Wednesday, 3rd November 2004 @ 12:14:41 PM AEST
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Well what can I say
This is far away the best poem you've written, and its flawless. You describe so well and I can almost feel your debate with your conscience. Excellent poem
Love Dawny x
Ps - You should always listen to your conscience, its the part that makes us all human!!! |
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