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Damented Look
Contributed by
DamentedSuicide
on
Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 10:08:05 AM in AEST
Topic:
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I sit on the floor
Screaming
Thats all I hear is the Screaming
my own It rings in my head
the knife I use to slice my flesh
Has fallen onto the ground
now the tears mingle with the blood
I scream not in pain
In anger the walls know my fist
I raid the medicine chest
Nothing
I grab the knife It slices it plays on my flesh
I hold in another scream
I thought I had but i heard it ringing in my ears
I search for the reason i should live
It is nowhere to be found
my knees hit the ground
to weak to cry
to weak to hurt
to insane to feel
this is only a peek into my damented life
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DamentedSuicide
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2004-11-02 10:08:05]
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Re: Damented Look
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 10:10:51 AM AEST
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great expresion , such a pained and sad write, i have been where you are now, there is a way out, but you just can't see it yet.
takecare
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Re: Damented Look
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by PhantomVampyress on
Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 10:37:21 AM AEST
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awesome write about pain.. you expressed that very well.. I enjoyed this poem
Peace and hope
*JENNA* |
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Re: Damented Look
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by deathdrop on
Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 10:55:26 AM AEST
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a very deep and emotional poem.
good flow. |
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