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Missing
Contributed by
MyInspiration
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Monday, 18th November 2002 @ 06:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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Now is the time. Now is the place. I'm missing the time I spent with you, I'm missing your smell and taste. I miss the memories that we shared. I miss the love when you cared.
I miss how you made me cry, without any emotions I just die. I miss the night when we had something, when I thought I knew you. I miss the love I had for you, there must be something new.
There must be something else to get you off my mind, but I can't escape these memories, I miss the stupid game we played, I miss the time we cried.
But you never cried for me, only for him. I dismiss your memories, I dismiss your sin. You will never know anything about me, it's to awkward now, don't try to come in.
I miss everything about you, when I held you so close. I never got to feel it, I never got your rose. I never had this feeling before, I never had any idea, what all this would lead to, when all this would cave in.
We were so close to lovers, yet so close to sin, we were so close to friends so close within. I miss how I felt before all this had left me, I miss everything, I miss thee.
I miss how it tortured me so, I miss your touch I miss the kiss you would blow. I'm missing everything, all that I know, I'm missing something, I just know. I'm missing you, but I must let go.
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Re: Missing
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by OreO on
Monday, 18th November 2002 @ 11:24:07 PM AEST
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This is so sad it made me cry
real hard, just a hint of advice on my
part would be...tell her how you miss her
don't live with regret, that's more painful
than anything so many things a person
can live with..i say tell her how you feel
and tell her you miss her..she may feel
the same way, you never know till you try
Beatufiul write, i really enjoyed this one
It moved me deep inside..
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::. |
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Re: Missing
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by MyInspiration on
Tuesday, 19th November 2002 @ 01:01:44 PM AEST
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| wow, thanks very much for your input oreo. i thank you, not only for some advice, but for commenting on all my poetry. unfortunately, i wrote most of these a few weeks ago, some of the feelings remain, but many do not. i gave up trying to get with the girl of my dreams, she hurt me to much, i dont think its worth it. but of course, i have to remain poetic and what not, so i still hold hope... |
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Re: Missing
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by LostDream on
Monday, 25th November 2002 @ 02:13:52 PM AEST
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Another beautiful poem!
Thank you for sharing that with us...I really know what you're feeling...
Sara |
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Re: Missing
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by Sarah22 on
Saturday, 14th December 2002 @ 03:30:33 PM AEST
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amazing work
on this poem . |
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