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Will You Hold Me Forever?
Contributed by
pixie
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Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 07:44:17 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Will you hold onto me forever?
Protect me in the winter weather,
Wrap me up in your love undying,
Comfort me when I am crying.
Please never let go of what we share,
I would just die if you weren’t there,
Never tell me that you don’t love me,
Together in love is what sets us free.
Will you take me in your arms always?
Please make sure our love forever stays,
Right next to you is where I wish to die,
Travel up with you into heaven in the sky.
Please hold me even in our death,
Let us together inhale our last breath,
Don’t leave me alone in this world,
Even in heaven I want to be your only girl.
I can see us together be each others side,
Only in each others hearts we confide,
Hold onto me & I will hold onto you,
We have a bond stuck tightly like glue.
Copyright ©
pixie
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2004-11-02 07:44:17]
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Re: Will You Hold Me Forever?
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by blowfish_jane on
Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 07:56:17 AM AEST
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Wow this is awesome, a very affectionate and beautiful poem.
Hugs,
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Re: Will You Hold Me Forever?
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by little_genna on
Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 08:01:52 AM AEST
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this is full of love and emotion. a truly heartfelt write. bless you hun for sharing this, i can truly relate to the feeling in this poem.
*hugs you*
take care
Gen xx |
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Re: Will You Hold Me Forever?
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by Red_October on
Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 08:03:51 AM AEST
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| This is very sweet and elegantly written. Beautiful. Tiffany J. (Red_October) |
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Re: Will You Hold Me Forever?
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by Stitch on
Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 09:27:41 AM AEST
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Sweet and lovely sentiments. We all wish for heaven in another's arms, don't we?
Stitch |
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Re: Will You Hold Me Forever?
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by PhantomVampyress on
Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 10:40:47 AM AEST
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aww this is another awesome write.. and expressed very well. Great job again!!
peace and hope
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