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Pretty, stupid thing
Contributed by
Rxqueen
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Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 05:38:21 AM in AEST
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God, I thought I had it, thought I had it good
did everything i was supposed, every thing I could!
Made myself over to be perfection in the flesh
only for you my inner beauty to mutilate and tresh!
Loving you was never easy, never easy at all
sometimes all i was to you, a little blow up doll
But giving up isn't my thing, and never will it be
so I made it my lifes perogative to make you love me!
The type of love I found was not the kind I dreamt and dreamed
At first I was bliss enchanted, my heart felt redeamed
but lies can decieve love and love can be lies
what do you think I now know I see when I look into your eyes?
Pretty thing, stupid, stupid, stupid am I
Why did I bother, bother to ever even give it a try
don't ever fall in love, you'll see doesn't pay
because broken hearts happen every single minute of every single day!!!!
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Re: Pretty, stupid thing
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by TedHuggableBare on
Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 06:39:49 AM AEST
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| I thought the same thing about falling in love since I have been there a few times now. But we would never know it was true love if we didn't feel pain that it tends to bring. I do wish that your husband would understand it's not love he's demonstrating, but the arrogance of taking someone for granted. It seems he needs a lesson in communication since that is how a relationship survives. I applaud you for trying your best and not giving up at the first rough moment, but I do know that there's only so much one person can do in a relationship of two. I do wish you luck and hope whatever you want will eventually happen for you. Take care, Ted Bare. |
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Re: Pretty, stupid thing
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 06:47:20 AM AEST
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awww I am so sorry that things arent working out for you, if he treats you so bad then maybe you are better off without him, you deserve to be treated with respect and love..a pained write *hugs*
takecare
pixie xx |
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Re: Pretty, stupid thing
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 06:55:52 AM AEST
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I think the absence of the pair of you will teach him a valuable lesson.
Good luck. |
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Re: Pretty, stupid thing
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by Stitch on
Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 08:00:55 AM AEST
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Interesting and telling write. The perfection syndrome is a subject that doesn't get treated often in poetry, but you have tackled it well. The concept of being able to be perfect and therefore have a perfect life always ignores the imperfection of those around you and, of course, yourself. This is raw and liberating. Nice stuff.
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Re: Pretty, stupid thing
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by Red_October on
Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 08:52:11 AM AEST
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| Why do we do this to ourselves? I really like this poem, related entirely in every single word. Tiffany J. (Red_October) |
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Re: Pretty, stupid thing
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by a_bear on
Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 10:09:48 AM AEST
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| I'm so sorry..hope your heart mends soon. Some men just aren't worth it, darlin. Find one that treats you as the treasure you are..because you are a treasure you know..and he's an..ass! great write.. |
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Re: Pretty, stupid thing
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by pander on
Monday, 8th November 2004 @ 07:21:52 PM AEST
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I love everything about this write! It's just brilliant in every single detail.
Maybe it's because I have kind of been there in parts. I too know what it's like to love someone who, in return, places you right at the bottom of their list of favourite people.
I know it's hard to face, but he's really not worth it!
Luv,
Pander
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