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Trapped
Contributed by
stonedraider23
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Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 03:39:25 AM in AEST
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Trapped in this small town
Isolated from society
Banned to a wheel chair
My selfesteem sinking down
Left with a limited variety
I can only stare
Why can't you see that I need you
Why can't you see that I want you
Why can't you see that I love you
Trapped on a dead end street
Isolated from your love
Banned away from holding you
My heart full and ready to burst
Left with little hope
I can only pray
Why can't you see that I need you
Why can't you see that I want you
Why can't you see that I love you
Trapped in this shell
My heart spilling too the ground
Banned from being free
Isolated from the world
Oh why can't you see
That you're everything to me
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2004-11-02 03:39:25]
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Re: Trapped
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by Rxqueen on
Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 05:43:24 AM AEST
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| Oh what a sad write! It is sad so many people feel trapped in their lives. And sometimes even when given a chance ti escape they can't because they are so used to being trapped and don't know how to live other wise. Good write. |
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Re: Trapped
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by savedbydeath on
Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 06:17:15 AM AEST
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aww such a sad but sweet poem,who is it that u love?hope she takes great care of u and makes u feel and helps u understand that ur not trapped!keep up the great job!
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Re: Trapped
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 06:52:36 AM AEST
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very sad, and moving *hugs*
takecare
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Re: Trapped
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by XxNights_ChildxX on
Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 05:15:21 PM AEST
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aww this wunz so sad and emotional*hugs* hehe
great write ^_^!!
Jenni xxoo |
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