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Twisted
Contributed by
happybunnyfan
on
Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 01:22:35 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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My life is Twisted
You may ask why
And this is how i will repliey,
My problems have been bottled up
Cause you never listin
Come home
Your not there
Try to talk
But you don't care,
You won't me all to
Your self
But you know this can't
Happpen,
Is my life really this Twisted?
Sitting in my room
Listing to rock music
Drowning out...
Unwanted sounds,
I'm trapped I feel like my walls
Are closing in on me
I can never get away
From the hate i feel
Inside me,
People say i'm gifted
But i believe my life is really Twisted
Torn between m parents
Going some place different
Every weekend,
At night i cry my soul out
In hope for someone to come
Save me
But it never happens...
Never happens
Can anybody see me?
Or am i just a dot in this world
That everyone has forgotten
About?,
Is there anbody that can hear me
Or are my screams
To low for you to hear them?,
Is anybody there
Or am i ust a part of this
Twisted reality
We call life?.
Copyright ©
happybunnyfan
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2004-11-02 01:22:35]
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Re: Twisted
(User Rating: 1 )
by veenu on
Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 07:29:24 AM AEST
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whenever we loose our lovers we just shattered up! and everything just nothing but for what we doing so if they dont want us than .................its ok........cheer up and fight the coming strugles well like the write the line especially at night................
may god bless u if it is realy happened with u .........or its just the write so what its good
keep sharing
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Re: Twisted
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 08:26:29 AM AEST
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Welcome to the site of compassionate poets who understand just where you are in life. We have all been down this road one way or another. I didn't read into it, that it was a "lover" but you are being pulled by mom and dad and you get lost in the middle with no one understanding your pain. Well, bunny, I understand and your screams ARE being heard... in my heart. If you need to chat with someone PM me any time. Never let the dark win because you ARE gifted! This is a very expressive write! My prayers are with you!
Angel always...godspeed...Joni |
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