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Kisses
Contributed by
Bruce
on
Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 12:25:47 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Kisses are very special, when love is in the air
A kiss between two lovers, is so wonderful to share
What has been created, by this tender kiss
A moment or two, of pure heavenly bliss
Something to remember, planted in your mind
That very first kiss, was truly one of a kind
You felt just fantastic, you trembled inside
The feeling you had, impossible to hide
The two of you together, embraced in each others arms
Totally infatuated, with each others charms
One Kiss after another, what was coming next
If I had to make a guess, it would surely be safe sex
When two people are in love, nothing else matters
Having sex together, is on both of your platters
Copyright ©
Bruce
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2004-11-02 00:25:47]
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Re: Kisses
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by blowfish_jane on
Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 12:29:21 AM AEST
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Bruce you are so romantic, i love your poem.
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Re: Kisses
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by PhantomVampyress on
Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 12:33:04 AM AEST
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great write on the kisses I enjoyed reading this one its awesome good job
Peace and hope
JENNA |
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Re: Kisses
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by Silent-No-More on
Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 12:42:10 AM AEST
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Ah.... kissing. (sigh) What a sweet write, Bruce!
"Totally infatuated, with each others charms"
I have to confess.... I sort of wish you left off with that lovely line. Leaving the 'where's it going' part to the reader's imagination. Not that there's anything wrong with sex "When two people are in love". *smile*
Hugs,
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Re: Kisses
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 07:04:35 AM AEST
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awww Bruce, this is loving, caring and so very,very sweet,
pixie xx |
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