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I want to die tonight
Contributed by
Doriens_Picture
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Monday, 1st November 2004 @ 11:56:04 PM in AEST
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I want to die tonight
When I fall asleep
But it’s not what it seems I’m
Not disheartened
But I must tend
To my dreams
Before they leave me
Before I’m left alone again
I want to die tonight
Slip into a coma
Where it’s beautiful
Just until you return
And I can wake up and fall
Into another dream
When I look into your eyes
I’m
Waking in a masterpiece
Painted just for me
Of a hazel sky
Like the ones
Only
Found in my dreams
Copyright ©
Doriens_Picture
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2004-11-01 23:56:04]
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Re: I want to die tonight
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by blowfish_jane on
Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 12:33:35 AM AEST
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Bravo this is fantastic, very well written.
Hugs,
Jane |
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Re: I want to die tonight
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by Silent-No-More on
Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 12:47:05 AM AEST
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Wow... I get this. I just posted something along the same line of thought. When the dream is sooo appealing, it's impossible not to want to give yourself to it.
Well done,
SNM |
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Re: I want to die tonight
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by Dan666 on
Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 06:13:51 AM AEST
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im glad you dont actually want to die nice ppoem it works really well
Dan666 xx |
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Re: I want to die tonight
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 07:07:48 AM AEST
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beautifully put together,
takecare
pixie xx |
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