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Untitled
Contributed by
NobodySpecial
on
Monday, 1st November 2004 @ 07:40:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Hey there
nice for you to come
and see me here
dying from pain
that you
so eagerly
bestowed upon me
never caring
what I felt
when you make
my tears fall
hiding it well
promised I wouldn't tell
You didn't believe
and had to
"take care" of me
Silencing my voice
by years of threats
pushing me around
like your little pet
bruises cover me
and still
I manage to hide it well
people ask
but I lie
They think they know
but they never will
in the corner I lay
hiding from your wrath
praying you won't come
Prayers are unheard
God forgot
all about me
Copyright ©
NobodySpecial
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2004-11-01 19:40:42]
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Re: Untitled
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 1st November 2004 @ 09:37:58 PM AEST
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| amazing. well expressed. |
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Re: Untitled
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 06:05:25 PM AEST
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| This is very sad, but I kind of like it. |
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Re: Untitled
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 27th February 2005 @ 03:46:39 AM AEST
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I feel that the expression of pain can be indeed therapeutic. Each person who has read this haunting piece, surely must have shared and related to this almost uncomprehendable pain. I know what it is to feel, excessively... yet i had forgotten, until reading this piece.
Conjuring those emotions I hadnt felt in a little while.
An emotional write.
All the best. |
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Re: Untitled
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by inoc on
Saturday, 5th March 2005 @ 05:00:21 AM AEST
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It's so Sad to think that God has forgotten about you.....!!!! Don't give up....
Pray to him for guidence and help...I pray that He will guard You in time of need.....be strong...I love your write...keep writing and release your pain
Inoc |
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