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Her Unknowing Face
Contributed by
chicken
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Monday, 1st November 2004 @ 07:10:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
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The girl's unknowing face,
Haunts my mind and soul.
I, not prepared for that moment,
Looked into those four-year-old eyes,
And wonder how it could happen to her.
She was too young, too innocent,
Too fragile to face such horror.
I shift my gaze to her parents,
Who, perhaps most saddingly,
Will someday have to explain what happened.
Then my mind, in a twist unexpected,
Shifts to the monster who did this.
True, the perpertraitor was a vile boy,
Of only thirteen years,
But there is nothing I want more in my rage,
Than to see him pay with his life.
For, through all my training and skills,
I cannot save this young girl's innocence.
Copyright ©
chicken
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2004-11-01 19:10:58]
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Re: Her Unknowing Face
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by jenny21614 on
Monday, 1st November 2004 @ 08:47:22 PM AEST
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| How awful. He will have to pay with his life, knowing everyday for the rest of his life that he ruined sumone elses is enough torture to last a life time. Good write, its good to get those feelings out! |
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Re: Her Unknowing Face
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 1st November 2004 @ 10:05:43 PM AEST
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| powerful and heart wrenching. |
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Re: Her Unknowing Face
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by happybunnyfan on
Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 12:45:53 AM AEST
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thats sad, for it to happen to a girl so youngs.
great write. |
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Re: Her Unknowing Face
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by blowfish_jane on
Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 01:25:37 AM AEST
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How awful and sad, just shows you how inhumane some people are. everyday hundreds of women all over the world are being raped and there's no one who can help them. Great poem.
Hugs,
Jane |
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Re: Her Unknowing Face
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by shelby on
Monday, 8th November 2004 @ 03:59:39 PM AEST
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made me cry I can feel your helplessness so very sad
Michelle |
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