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My Love Died
Contributed by
Moca
on
Monday, 18th November 2002 @ 03:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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My love died-
Bloody,
Explosive
Suicide
The stains
Still show
On the walls
Of my soul.
All I can do
Is clean up
The mess
Of me again;
Try to piece
Back all the
Scraps that
Made me
Whole and
Who I am.
And I will
Continue
Loving,
My sweet
Friends...
For from my
Pain
I never
Learn.
Copyright ©
Moca
... [
2002-11-18 15:20:00]
(Date/Time posted on
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Re: My Love Died
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by flirtyrockstar on
Monday, 18th November 2002 @ 03:30:51 PM AEST
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Love forever scars us when things dont work out but it is human nature to move on.....and to hurt ourselves again until one day we find someone who makes up for everything we've ever felt that was wrong. Until then we will continue finding all the wrongs, I guess because it will make "the one" easier to recognize, or just make them seem even more fabulous.
nice poem....
*~<3 LoNeR~* |
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Re: My Love Died
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by lil_angel on
Monday, 18th November 2002 @ 03:30:58 PM AEST
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| A wonderful write...sad but good. Good job and keep the poems coming! |
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Re: My Love Died
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by MoonlitAngel on
Monday, 18th November 2002 @ 05:15:20 PM AEST
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Love the setup of this! I never learn either. Guess we've got something in common. lol...
~ MoonlitAngel |
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Re: My Love Died
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by OreO on
Monday, 18th November 2002 @ 11:59:29 PM AEST
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Beautiful write, i really enjoyed
this one, Thanks for sharing it
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::. |
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Re: My Love Died
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by yellow_sundragon on
Thursday, 12th December 2002 @ 11:44:09 PM AEST
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I love the structure. And the beginning. Good choice of words. It's beautiful!!
YS |
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