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struggling like me
Contributed by
kailadragon
on
Monday, 1st November 2004 @ 05:45:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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one small candle
lit in a watery room
trying to keep the flame
struggling for its own
one butterfly
struggling against the hurricane
fighting for some space
looking for a friend
one star
in a deep, dark sky
faintly beaming
its beauty hiding deep in layers of blue velvet
yet still there
one red rose
buried in a garden of black
discovery waiting
different from the others
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kailadragon
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2004-11-01 17:45:40]
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Re: struggling like me
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by alasdaircairns on
Monday, 1st November 2004 @ 07:01:35 PM AEST
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| This is beautiful, almost has an eastern mysticism to it. I love the feeling of one small thing part of a bigger hole, just stuggling to exist. Simply sublime. |
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Re: struggling like me
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by AdamChantell on
Monday, 1st November 2004 @ 11:03:42 PM AEST
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| i like the imagery this brings out.. very nice write. |
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Re: struggling like me
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 07:20:35 AM AEST
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awww beautiful and full of emotion,
takecare
pixie xx |
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Re: struggling like me
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by surge_joebot on
Saturday, 27th November 2004 @ 10:49:37 PM AEST
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I love the feeling from this, you did a good job, lovely metaphor for everyones life isnt it?
keep it real
Demelza |
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Re: struggling like me
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by fredmonte101 on
Wednesday, 18th June 2014 @ 09:00:34 AM AEST
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| Life in its various forms does ahve its individual struggles. Well written. Thank you :) |
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