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I Feel...when it's Raining
Contributed by
youknowwho
on
Monday, 1st November 2004 @ 05:32:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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The air is heavy,
A hemorrhaging sky to drench me with wonder;
The confines of yesterday melt away
With the comfort of the falling rain,
And each droplet speaks volumes to me
Of the tears that we share;
I keep my eyes open this time
As I absorb your running words,
The leaves of these trees wither
Yet maintain a perpetual beauty;
You could drop me off the end of this world
And I wouldn’t think any less of you;
I taste the silence,
And I feel the moisture from your lips,
The warmth of your touch parting
Always taking my heart in your hands;
As the solitary flower dies within winter’s grasp,
I mourn for its life,
And know that I shall bleed once more.
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2004-11-01 17:32:57]
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Re: I Feel...when it's Raining
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by Stitch on
Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 04:57:30 PM AEST
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Too much here for me to begin to comment. Your images are so powerful and moving. Your ending so sad and desperate.
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Re: I Feel...when it's Raining
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 4th April 2006 @ 12:36:15 PM AEST
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i love it...the images left in the reader's mind...so powerful...beautiful
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