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Music
Contributed by
lifefliesby
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Monday, 1st November 2004 @ 05:27:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
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My stance
Smile
Emotions high
With all my friends around
From tall
Way short
And all between
And now there is no sound
He stands so still
So tall
And proud
And then his arms float up
They sway
At first
Then wave around
As all the suspense builds
Then..... wow
We sing
Our pitches match
All voices sound as one
Now WE
WE stand
So tall and proud
And sing for all we got
*I love you guys. I love you Chels. I love you Dad. Thank you all*
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Re: Music
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 1st November 2004 @ 07:12:21 PM AEST
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| great poem. Have fun at the concert don't stay up to late. You'll need some aspirin after cause you'll have a music handover. |
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Re: Music
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by liquidsunshine on
Monday, 1st November 2004 @ 08:54:27 PM AEST
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I love you, sweetie.
And to think, I'M the one who lit the fire under your a*s and got you in there.
You were great.
Amazing.
I had goosebumps.
Love
Forever and for always,
Chelsea |
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Re: Music
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by DaveXerox on
Thursday, 26th April 2007 @ 10:07:03 PM AEST
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| There's nothing quite like the rush that comes from performing in front of an audience, especially when they applaud. I haven't yet tried to encapsulate that feeling in a poem but you may just have inspired me to do so. Well written! |
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