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Waitin' at Heaven's Door
Contributed by
mysticpoet
on
Monday, 1st November 2004 @ 04:59:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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When I die, my love, sing no sad songs for me.
Take my ashes to the shore, Set my spirit free.
Smile and be happy, remember me with a love song.
Live your life to its fullest, sadness and grief would be wrong.
Now that I've gone, my spirit has been set free.
Everywhere you look, my love, you will see me.
You'll see me in the rain as it gently falls to the ground.
You'll see me in the blooms that grow, silently without a sound.
You'll see me in the hummingbird that flits from bloom to bloom.
Remember all the good, my love, and you'll have no sadness or gloom.
When I die, my love, free my spirit at the shore.
Sing only love songs for me, I'll be waiting at Heaven's door.
Be happy, my love, I'll be waiting for your spirit to be set free.
I'll be waiting at Heaven's door, for you to be forever with me.
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Re: Waitin' at Heaven's Door
(User Rating: 1 ) by joe-joe on
Monday, 1st November 2004 @ 05:24:43 PM AEST (User
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I was just thinking about death and dying this morning, I had a true and trusted friend to die, this made me realize how blessed I was to have known her, nice write... |
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Re: Waitin' at Heaven's Door
(User Rating: 1 ) by mysticpoet on
Monday, 1st November 2004 @ 06:29:36 PM AEST (User
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Sorry about your friend. It's always hard to lose someone you love and care about. I wrote this one night thinking about my parents. My dad loved hummingbirds, I could see his smile as he watched them. |
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Re: Waitin' at Heaven's Door
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Sunday, 7th November 2004 @ 04:24:22 AM AEST (User
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Wow, one can feel the luv in this write!
It's a masterpeice of heaven's beauty inside the immortal soul.
Pure luv jus flowing.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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