|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Ruler
Contributed by
-Lord-Vince-Black-
on
Monday, 1st November 2004 @ 02:10:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
|
Ruler of the world
Ruler of heaven
Ruler of fire
Ruler of the unknown
That you have the power
The power to change
Change human lifes
Change human minds
Would that make your life easy???
Would that make your life hard???
Would you be satisfied???
Satisfied with the things you change???
Satisfied with the things you create???
What would you create???
What would you change???
I think I should change a lot of things
Create a lot of things
Destroy a lot of things
Things I don’t like
Things I don’t want
Things I hate
Change things
Things that aren’t fun
Things that aren’t polite
But if you change and create almost everything
To something I like
To something I love
Wouldn’t that be boring???
Wouldn’t that be sad???
I don’t think I should change everything
Just a lot of things…
Copyright ©
-Lord-Vince-Black-
... [
2004-11-01 14:10:18]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Ruler
(User Rating: 1 )
by Sinned on
Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 12:56:23 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
The world was created perfect.
Man was given free will and he chose to be like God.
Sin then entered the world.
We can change the world for good in our own little corner if we try.
sinned |
|
|
Re: Ruler
(User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 15th January 2005 @ 11:55:18 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| if the world was created perfect, why did it change to unperfect even without humans on it? but anyway. very good write, but the repetition of words, even though for format, was close to tiring. |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
