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Betrayal

Contributed by poet_of_anger on Monday, 1st November 2004 @ 12:30:06 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry



Through all of the years
You said you were my friend
You wiped away my tears
You said you'd be there till the end
Well has the end come so soon
You've left me down and out
I feel like I've been removed
So now I will take a stand and shout
You have stabbed me in my back
You have betrayed the trust we had
And if you ever want it back
It would be like saving a dead man
Thanks to you
I found the blues
I have a love I can not have
Thanks to you
I feel like falling
Falling forever into the sea that has been cast below my feet
I want to end it all right now
I want to forget that you were there
I want to erase from my memory all that once was pleasant in my eyes
All I ever did was ask Why
Why did you betray all we once had
Why did you take the one that you knew I always loved
Why do you not seem to care about me being sad
And Why does the world seem obsesssed with taking away my blood
The Blood of Sacrifice
The Blood of My sad life
I have given up again
I have fallen down the bend
You built me up from scrap
Now you treat me like crap
I won't take this
I don't need this
GET AWAY
Betrayer of trusts
Betrayer of love
Stay away from my sight
Stay away for your own good
Betrayer of Life
Betrayer of Hope
Please give me a knife
I will bleed as I float




Copyright © poet_of_anger ... [ 2004-11-01 12:30:06]
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Re: Betrayal (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Monday, 1st November 2004 @ 12:31:43 PM AEST
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who needs enemies when you got friends who betray you eh? im sorry for this pain, a very well expressed angry write, you are better off without them,

takecare

pixie xx


Re: Betrayal (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Monday, 1st November 2004 @ 02:19:09 PM AEST
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wow this is a really awesome write on betrayel of a friend .. I have had this happen to me also.. but something i learned long ago.. if you have a friend who does this they truly were not your friend. true friends would never betray..

Peace and hope
JENNA




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